A farewell to my Bluerose

by - June 14, 2018

   I will not allow my tears to flow at this moment.
 but instead I'm being thankful because you give me an inspiration for everything. 
This is the hardest part without saying goodbye.

 
    

 Allow me to write things to be loud because your anonymous.
 I am so glad to know you. Although our acquaintance wasn't long.
 You have made a big impact in my life and it is thanks to you why I remain strong. 
The short time that I'll spend my time to you is precious than shimmering stones.
 But unfortunately it can be bittersweet.
 When you disappear without actions and words. I feel incomplete,
 The sorrow and pain was there.
 But leaving in this world into reality is necessary needed.
Fantasy is just for imagination only. 
We live in reality to find yourself into something different.
 You create a story and find your journey.
  Since you're already gone. I need to accept the fact that I need to moving forward.
Farewell words too often part, and cleave, with sorrow, aching hearts.
Emotions ran through my head.
Let me scream and say I love you for the last time.
Tomorrow will be a another day for me.
It may seems impossible, but it's true.
Now that you left me, I am beyond sad.
I love and I miss you more than you'll ever know.
You've taught me so much, and I want to say thank you.
Until again without any day.






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51 comments

  1. Bbbeeeaaauuuuttttiiiiffffuuuuuuullllllll!!!

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  2. I love these poems. I'm a big fan of poetry;keep up the good work

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    1. I'm just practice make a poem hahahha! Thank you for the compliment!

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  3. You express the bittersweet sentiment so well from the heart. As others have said, this is beautiful! May what feels severed complete it’s cycle so you will always know your wholeness. ❤️ Xo, Evelyn, PathofPresence

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    1. Thank you for the compliment! I'll really appreciate it!

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  4. What a lovely and beautiful poem.

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    1. Thank you Tammy! ❤️❤️❤️ Spread love

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  5. this was definitely a beautiful and well written poem.

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  6. It is so hard to say goodbye. You did a great job of expressing yourself

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    1. Thank you! This is the way That I express my toughest goodbye for someone!

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  7. You've got a great way to write so keep it up and I absolutely loved this piece of writing!

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  8. This is such a lovely poem. You did a wonderful job with it.

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  9. What a beautiful and touching poem, you definitely have a way with words.

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    1. Thank you sarah! This is my first time that I write a poem in my blog! Thank you!

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  10. This is such a heart felt poem. It is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Hi Ophelia! Your most welcome! This is my first poem and suddenly it's a farewell for someone! </3

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  11. This was a beautiful post. It was written in a beautiful manner and brings smile on my face while reading this. Keep up the good work. Looking more from you.

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    1. Hi Akhil! You don't need to worry I will post more! Thank you for reading my blog :)

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  12. what a way of saying goodbye! such beautiful and elegant wording! great work!

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  13. Such a sweet farewell prose. A wonderful way to say goodbye.
    xoxo
    Annie

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  14. Wow what a deep poem. I took two interpretations from this as this is dedicated to an ex lover or someone who passed.

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  15. Wow. Nice poem! You wrote it beautifully. I can feel all your emotions.

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    1. Thank you I'll appreciate your comment! ❤️

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  16. That’s a lovely post with beautiful pictures. keep up the good work. Nice blog I must say.

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  17. Goodbyes are not forever, they say. Somebody more worthy is coming! Meanwhile, continue writing and expressing yourself through poem, lovely composition!

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  18. Well done! I like the way you blend in moving forward with farewell! Thanks for sharing.

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  19. Such beautiful line you have written. Goodbyes are really difficult and we all need to keep moving on in the journey called "Life".

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  20. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing your poetry with this audience!

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  21. Such a gorgeous poem! Beautifully written. It is so difficult to arrange words for me so i am always blown away when i read a poem! you're so talented!

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  22. Such a wonderful poem. I loved reading it.

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  23. What a beautiful poem, nicely written, you have a way with words

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  24. This is sad and almost got me into tears. I remember someone because of this, the person who makes my words flow and makes me wrote even though it’s sad. Beautiful poem.

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  25. Poetry is a good way to let things out.

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  26. This is such a touching post! It really hit at my heart strings because so many people can relate to this.

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  27. You write very well! Like your blog!

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  28. Thank you guys all of you! You make me an inspire to create poetry! Thank you so much! ❤️💋

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  29. "You create a story and find your journey". This was the the best and the most motivating line of this poem.

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